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Progress in Dresden

Hard at work on Kill The King, if only on weekends. Hit 13,000 words, so the big life-changing catalyst has occurred and the hero is on his way to figuring out if he wants any part of it.
It’s quite a cathartic story to write, as they go. My heroes are among a larger group of lowlives tasked with bringing the heads of the richest people in the city, so that they might all enjoy a slice of the money, but things are never really quite as they seem in my books.
To sum it up as a logline:

“On the verge of bankruptcy and starvation, Vincent, a down-on-his-luck warehouse worker pairs up with Jimmy, a freelance criminal, to take on a series of assassination contract; but when they realise the client might be setting them up to fail, they’ll have to work together to make a real difference before the city burns down around them.”

Me, Kill The King (working title)

I got a little over halfway through the first draft before it collapsed under me, not the first time that’s happened, but I feel I’ve levelled up as a writer since then, so I have high hopes to make this a decent read, or to at least write it to the end. Perhaps some snippets and sneak peeks next time, if I’m happy with them.  

Weekends are for the novel, but weekdays are for short stories. Currently working on a horror short that takes place on the moon, though I’m a couple thousand words in and the protagonist hasn’t reached the moon yet, so I might have to edit it quite heavily. More on that soon.

On other other side of the page, I read Slaughterhouse Five by Kurt Vonnegut, and it effected me deeply. 
For those who haven’t had the pleasure, it’s about an American soldier in the Second World War, taken captive in Germany and held in as a prisoner of war in Dresden. He survives the firebombing there and goes on to be abducted by aliens, but that’s besides the point. What I loved most was that with EVERY SINGLE mention of death — whether it be a five-star general killed in combat or a single microbe being killed by soap — he follows that sentence with “So it goes.”
I found that this made all death equal, dignified, and memorable. This alternate cover I found online (or is it just some art, I’m not sure) stuck with me:

source: Zach Adams (I think)

And I’m not going to be in Germany for too much longer, so I thought, “why not?”At the lovely Erika & Kurt tattoo parlour in oldtown Dresden, I had the (agonising, excruciating) pleasure of getting this piece done, by Gustavo.

Still limping, two days later. Do tattoos get more difficult, the older you get?

More on my Instagram.

Another Success

I did it! It is with a joyous heart that I announce the completion of the first draft of my fourth* book, The House Always Wins, at 75,262 words. That’s 165 single-spaced pages, according to Word.

*I am, of course, not counting Kill The King. That’s on the shelf until I diagnose what was killing it, and may just start it again from fresh.

Could not be happier with how it’s turned out. It’s spooky, action-packed, heartfelt, and a total rollercoaster. Next comes the alienation, the period where I set it aside for at least three months (ample time for my ideal reader to come back with notes and that ambrosia for all writers, ego-stroking praise) until it’s so unfamiliar to me that I can go back through and make my own notes as to what needs to be changed in the next draft. 

I could conceivably keep up this cycle with all of my books indefinitely, but I would definitely like to gain some kind of representation at some point. If you can recommend any good agents for the traditional publishing route, let me know. 

Next up is… well, I don’t know. I have some very promising story seeds, but I think I need something more lighthearted but, more importantly, shorter. I haven’t read too many short stories, but it’s time to get a handle on that and perhaps submit some to some kindred magazines. 

Feel free to drop the title of your favourite short story in the comments, and I’ll give it a read.

The tradition of getting a tattoo to celebrate a completed first draft continues.

Fourth post

Not much to update. 

I’ve added another two scenes to Feast that had been knocking on the back of my skull for attention, both of which actually improve the pacing and suspense. Stephen King said that each subsequent draft should be 90% the length of the draft before it, but sometimes you just realise something important was missing. 

I won’t give a date that it’ll be ready, because my editor is incredibly thorough, and you can’t rush that kind of quality. 

Instead I will be uploading the first two chapter of my long-suffering novel, Dirty Eyes. I’ve put a link to that page at the bottom of this post, but fair warning: it refused to format the dialogue properly, and I blame WordPress. 

Have a good week.

Dirty Eyes preview